Autumn Haiku
step over brown leaves
pull on the extra blanket
I can feel them fall
leaves have been changing
slipping into longer sleeves
now I feel the change
(10/2/12–10/4/12)
Trying to capture that "haiku moment," an instant impression of the here and now of experience and embodied perspective, is not as easy as 17 syllables. These are two haiku I wrote recently trying to express the same idea with, I feel, varying success.
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